Third Panel Review held on 10th Aug, 2010

I was advised to look closely at the narrative, bringing it more clearly without getting lost in translating the script into visual elements.

The panel felt that I need to communicate the story better, and in spite of it being a good idea, it runs the risk of losing meaning and emphasis.

They were concerned that the narrative does talks about the main character’s paranoia/hallucination but it does not gives much impact over the main character. This might need explanation during viewing this as a film.

I was then asked to begin work on a preliminary storyboard and animatic so that they could see what the film might feel like.
In conclusion, the panel wanted to see a complete storyboard at the next review.